Rebel against the harem

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welcome2atlantis
18 hours ago

@welcome2atlantis please end with him getting fked in some way. I hate shoujos that always forgive s*t fathers for being s*t fathers.

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This is the little sister's fault. And the father also cannot escape responsibility, because he u...

This is quite boring. It literally just jumps around trying to be funny, but it's not really hitting the mark. It's more annoying than anything. I'll give this a few more chapters, but I can see why it's rated sooo low.
Power levels don't make sense either. How can he knock out the goddess or even hurt her? I know power levels don't matter in a comedy, but it has to at least logically work.

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Jaime Griffiths
6 days ago

@Jaime Griffiths 90% chance of harem bs, let's hope it's the remaining 10% that isn't, so it can actually become a decent story

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Huh... given the cover art I was expecting a bit more of a psychotic and bleak declaration - not tha...
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DrDrako
1 week ago

@DrDrako the thing is, if they stay the course, a d the mc grows stronger, what's the point? It's like how the demon king doesn't immediately kill the hero but waits until the hero grows strong enough fight them. This is along the same lines. Rather than wait for the hero to get stronger but staying with the perfect plan, it's better to move faster and give the mc less time to grow. It makes sense in most contexts, especially since the mc in this case is your literal nemesis 

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I always hate the "the protagonist has interfered with our plans, we must bring our plans forward...

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Kazooie
1 week ago

@Kazooie more like bad mtl

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"doesn't it hurt?" >tries to touch him "he looked ready to kill me" Is the author stupid or pu...

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Kazooie
1 week ago

@Kazooie that's all fls with childhood bfs though. It's just this was the first one to show what actually happens from third person instead of rose tinted female protagonists pov.

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Wow her mom really is 100% unredeemable trash, stealing from, betraying and destroying your devot...

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shiro
1 week ago

@shiro I don't, it's too convenient. That or she was an orphan baby her mom picked up. Anything that will distance her and the subml from the b*h mom and dad

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ahhhh fr hope that maybe he is the biological father of her???
and that he treats her how a chi...