Ugh come on man don't mix funny moments here. It ruins the mood 😭
Mozart Di Auditore
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Imma say it right now, this is the type of story I'd actually disliked if they added a whole harem/romance trope early on. I still wanna see that later but there's much to the main character that we do not know yet!! I actually want to know more of him and his struggles first.
Bullshit mentorship. 😂 Blatant excuse to throw the waifu at him. He wasn't even offered a mentor either anyways. This is a weird setup.
Honestly I was already wondering what would the next conflict be. Another gal was somewhere in the list but I honestly thought there would be some form of confrontation with other boys that are your typical a**s or whatever. While this is all about the gal redemption, I wouldn't mind another type of resolution where the 2nd arriving is the one to turn into the actual heroine.


I remember reading this first chapter months ago, and thiking how boring and "standard" it looked. Like no offence to the writer but this is so bland. Apart from being the standard "being kicked fromt he hero's party" and "not actually gauging MC's power properly", it lacked some spice, something that tells us "my story is a tiny bit different tho". Lazy plotting, just meeting a heroine who conveniently was looking for someone just like him, right after getting kicked it's just peak isekai bruh

everything's going to sh**, man!
