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The status is still ongoing, was this really the ending? It makes no sense, and I won't re-read it 5+ times to understand it, this is insanity.
Unnecessary conflict and a weird topic for the conflict but because you wouldn't expect it, its passable. Alex seems have a strong spine, not forgetting a grudge this deep is the correct answer.
Milo is rightfully angry, the author trying to blame the spore for milo's burst of anger is not going to spark any empathy in the reader
It feels weird, the Mc is losing too much screen time at the start where the Mc needs to hog at least 99% of screen time, if that fails to happen then that's bad writing, and if Rikka is the main character then the cover showing Winnie, basically makes the cover a bait, you would expecr a depressed magical girl past her prime slowly gaining back her !MOTIVATION! as she outshines her past leader, that would be what the cover would suggest to us the reader, and not family drama of a side character.
The romance genre wasn't mentioned, but okay, the translator chose he after all, after what was shown it seems like the correct choice, it seems he is a he and not a woman, strange, knowing that he is a magical girl, so far the 2 star rating is pretty accurate
The "spores" cursing is weird, making the enemy feel human is either a setup for a twist or its just a weird way to show the enemy
So bro didn't want to live in the spotlight, so she left by faking her death, then lived like a background character, but the way she wanted, kinda spineless and cowardly but you can't really blame her, but there seems to be a problem with identity or with the translation, like how does a man become a magical GIRL? Dont you have to be a girl with magical powers to become a magical girl?
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