Story seems promising but could go downhill fast. I expect a lot of good stuff though. I hope the author won't disappoint me.
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Finnally a MC with a functioning brain!

This MC is one of the stupidest I have ever seen. Why had the author write the story like this.
Well. The story started out as good, promising, interesting but all became bad. Sadge. Going to change my rating.
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PurrpiTator10 months ago
@PurrpiTator Still refreshing. The way it is written was never boring so far. I know something is coming but it is always unpredictable how it will be done.
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Mc: "Alright, I'll do something nice today."
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Grateful entity: "Here's is your reward. My McGuff...
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Dante1 year ago
@Dante Any random person who learned some English in school would notice that the translation is inaccurate and poor. Ask someone to review the translation instead of making lame excuses.
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@Dante sorry if i made any mistakes, it's late at night and english is not my first langua...
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Demonking Baal1 year ago
@Demonking Baal 

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The way she's treating him like an object...At least the mc treated cassin like a dog not a thing......

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Luis C.1 year ago
@Luis C. Yes. He is so annoying that if it doesn't change I may drop this sh**. He even reverts back what he changed to previously without any reason. He is not traumatised he is an idiot who cannot think.
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Bro this guy's personality is just all over the place. It's kinda annoying tbh. Just pick a lane and...
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Shadow laws1 year ago
@Shadow laws You found that scene funny? 

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@Soldemon maybe he wasn't always a orphan , probably became one recently... .. but it was...
I understand the comedy aspect of the MC but so far he is very stupid. I hope he improves his method of rage point generation.
This is just so nice to read so far. 

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Chuck1 year ago
@Chuck Check again. Her legs are normal.
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Snake lady got snake leg going on. When it first shows her she has her legs crossed correctly but th...

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Buff Jesus1 year ago
@Buff Jesus Got a free waifu
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He just wanted a necklace...
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Vanix1 year ago
@Vanix 

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NO IT SHOULD'VE BEEN ME NOT HIM, ITS NOT FAIR...
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Aldenais1 year ago
@Aldenais The aftermath of a war is like that.
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Everything is just so sad...
Well this started out as good and interesting. But got strange when the human king appeared at the auction. Then it become downhill. So many idiotic stuff happening.....
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Pimpong1 year ago
@Pimpong Yes, the director's kiss would be so much better for the protagonist. Right? 

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