Starrcrossed

Starrcrossed

I enjoy slop, but I draw the line at horribly written characters in slop.

Joined 06/02/2025

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Sayu
1 year ago
@Sayu Real. I don't understand the setting being modern but then being like it is from a fantasy romance story. And then Yohan's brother is just.. missing? Why include the younger brother if he isn't used for any plot besides another Helbert cold stare.
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Art feels wasted on this nonsense story....
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rane
1 year ago
@rane Having trauma doesn't mean you can excuse behavior you inflict on others.
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Why y'all hate him the way he act selfish because of is truma😭...
Of all the endings, this was one of them. I think the author just wanted to draw the MC in their various kinks (Good scenes for that), not actually make a compelling story, which definitely threw EVERYONE off it looks like. Oh well. 
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Just to rant about the story... ALL THAT BECAUSE OF A FAMILY EVENT?! Like, ML's entire motive was because of a birthday party. MC is right to be pis***, like wtf? But of course, happy endings so all is forgiven. Just a silly lil guy, teehee! Ugh...
Well, wasn't wrong, the ending was lame. Poor Nox. Tricked forever. Got a bit too upset about the political aspect of a 52 chapter Yaoi, though. Whoopsie.🙃
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Undeserving ML got to manipulate the MC the entire story. MC should've just taken the Captain title and stayed single after all the manipulation Allon did.

Also, Kyle is a descendant, but she doesn't deserve the throne either? Just because she is the last of her bloodline that hasn't been in power for 100 years. I'm surprised the Houses didn't just... overthrow Raios, since they say Raios doesn't have the best magic ability. Also, surprised Raios just up and fled instead of idk, using the enemy country to pull the Houses away? Yeah, they "won the fake war" at the start, but that was a ploy anyways, because Allon says they always pulled back after decimating the Country's defenses... Ugh.. if you don't want to make a good political plotline, don't write a half-assed one!
Phorcys isn't wrong that Allon is using Nox as a tool. But, the story is so fked because everyone is written poorly. Just gonna keep reading to see the lame ending where the undeserving ML gets what he wants in the end and the MC gets to feel like a bird in a cage, yippee
G**, I need to finish this just to truly dislike Allon as a ML. Dude does every single shi**y thing and then goes "Now that I know that I wasn't the only person using you as a pa**, I feel bad, sorry!" Like what? Fking hypocritical writing.
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