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This story is so funny! Giving a Lovecraftian eldrich being-like presence to a complete airhead girl and showing us both perspectives might actually be one of the most original and genius moves these type of stories have ever seen.

This story is so funny! Giving a Lovecraftian eldrich being-like presence to a complete airhead girl and showing us both perspectives might actually be one of the most original and genius moves these type of stories have ever seen.

It's so frustrating when the MCs won't reveal the whole story to the other characters for bullsh*t reasons, she could have just said that she felt that her power was being taken away and talked about the other kid that lost his abilities, even if they don't fully believe it at first they would at least investigate. Keeping stuff like that just to create drama later is dumb and lazy, if you intend to save a plot point for later just have the characters not know about it or actually give them a good reason to keep the secret..

Don't even waste your time reading this, the author refused to do any world building or character development and the FL is not proactive at all so everything just happens for no reason out of nowhere and yet the plot doesn't move at all for over 30 chapters (the story was so bad I stopped reading around chapter 20 but I still scrolled to watch the art for about 15 chapters and still the FL did nothing on her own, she just reacted to whatever was happening right at that moment) , the art is passable but most of the FL's hairstyles suck for some reason. Even if you want to read something brainless watching paint dry may feel like less of a waste of time than reading this if you've already read more than 5 stories like this one and aren't a teenager.

I'm so glad I that I skipped to the last chapter, this was abandoned here because it was bad just as I suspected, there are more chapters here but I'm not even gonna bother, if the story couldn't get good in 30 chapters it would be stup*d to endure it for 50 chapters more just to read a predictable ending.

I was really trying to finish this but nvm, everything in this plot happens out of nowhere for absolutely no reason, just artificial drama and nonsense because the author can't be bothered with world building and character development. Since the story is so trash I'll just skip to watch the art in the remaining chapters just so this doesn't feel like a complete waste of time..

This story is so sh*t that I'm not even sure that it being yuri instead would fix it, it would definitely be better but since the main plot has gone absolutely nowhere for 16 chapters I doubt it.
Man did I pick the wrong manhwa to read while "working", I'll try to push on out of morbid curiosity and because after reading something so bad the next time I read an actually good story I will definitely appreciate it more xD

Romance from 0 to 100 after 12 chapters for absolutely no real reason other than "I found you interesting" and her changing her mind about him out of nowhere is such poor writing and pacing, I wanted to read a short story that seemed finished but this is so bad that I'm beginning to think that this was cancelled and that's the reason why it's so short.....

Immediately pushing romance with a toxic, controlling, and pushy ML already makes me want to drop it. I hope I'm wrong but that is a character archetype that Korean girls love for some reason and I've read so many stories that turned into sh*t for this reason that I'm not willing to put up with this anymore :/

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R
3 months ago
@R @R If it's the usual toxically pushy ML that Korean girls like so much for some reason I will probably drop it too, thanks for the heads up👌
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Since the first chapter, this story sounds familiar. Now with the ml, it feels even more familiar. I...
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GHOSTTIE
3 months ago
@GHOSTTIE Mediocre authors writing slop don't really care about researching, they're happy using info they barely half remember for reference..
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Its not a wyvern its a dragon how do ppl confuse the 2

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Kurou
3 months ago
@Kurou Facts are not opinions but ok😂
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@xXEdgelordeXx Welp I still standing with my view n yea whatever you say bro Coz I don't k...