are we going to see the same fight for the next 20 chaps ?? ....

i dont know but i really dont feel it anymore... startet of good. it was something different and really nice to read. but know it just becomes anoying nothing to very littel to do with the original idea .. shame

broo come on is it so difficult to put the chapeters in the correct order .... he has only one job!!!!!

the story is good but this dume girl is destroying the mood over and over agin..

now it is just gettinf dume...

bro ... really now ...

bro had only one job and he couldnt do it ..... twich !!

i gotta say this is the longest weeak ever ... what kind of carrer has he now ??

shame it strated out really good but now its just getting more and more ..........

Bro whyyyy there is not need for a cliffhanger

bro get to the point .....

bro get to the point .....

Bro the longer iam reading this scene the more i have to think about this joke
what's the difference between a knife and their conversation .... a knife has a F*** point

you can say what you want but mc is a true equal opertunity a** whopper