Half the text doesn't make sense, but I like the story nonetheless. Welp.

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So... a guy wanting to be touchy feely is oh so normal, but if a girl shows interest, that's being bad? Madonna-Wh***-Complex on top of the born-se**-yesterday bullshit?
Nah, this is enough. I hoped he'd get better and she'd assert herself at least somewhat, but I don't think it will happen. And even if it happens later on, I can not survive this level of Fremdschämen...
Good buy. See you in a better story.
Nah, this is enough. I hoped he'd get better and she'd assert herself at least somewhat, but I don't think it will happen. And even if it happens later on, I can not survive this level of Fremdschämen...
Good buy. See you in a better story.
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Mariamiabout 1 month ago
@Mariami That's because it's - and I do not say it lightly - cringe and toxic.
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I CANT- ITS SO EMBARRASSING TO READ FOR SOME REASON
...This was cute. If this whole story is a train wreck, where you can't look away, no matter how horrible it gets, because you hope someone survives it, this chapter was like seeing a dog jump out of said treinwreck with minor injuries (those being the FL being on the developmental stage of playing house).
"Talk it out and listen to what she's feeling in her own words, OOOR do a huge, emotionally charged gesture, where she will definitely fell guilty, if it doesn't eraser her very plausible, negative feelings? Yeah, the latter it is. Easier to deal with than talking about why I am the way I am and confronting my past. Oh, I better make her friend sign it too, so she thinks her friends are on my side. I'm so romantic!"
- probably about what he thought
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- probably about what he thought
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Moght drop. This is getting stupid. And the ML is still a creep.
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Mimiabout 1 month ago
@Mimi Yeah, but she looks 11, not 17. Roamce between 17yolds? Most natural thing in the world. Romance involving someone who looks 11? 

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cause she is one? They are minors ig? Teens right?...
Yeah, when you don't know what you're agreeing to, you're not actually agreeing to it. Hence why we even have terms like "informed consent". But atbleast ML seems to be aware enough not to push...
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Simperofgojoabout 1 month ago
Fk me, I acidentally disliked while scrolling... MB :(
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In middle school 😨😨...
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Simperofgojoabout 1 month ago
@Simperofgojo A girl I used to know, her sister had her first time when she was 12. I am still so uncomfortable thinking about that. But it does happen.
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In middle school 😨😨...
Why would he tell that to his rival? Does he want him to not move on? I think he's getting a kick out o being jealous and having a rival or something. He's trying his best, yet he's still a creep.
That kid is posessed by a 45yo divorcee.
Well, at least he's not pushy anymore. Good for them. Ball is in her court now.
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serenityabout 1 month ago
@serenity Yeeah... And Iroha is like "I better get used to apologising for normal ever day stuff constantly!". So ready to be abused. My hope is all on character development.
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haruki is walking red flag I said what I said...
Dear G**, I hate the ML. He does not care one bit for what Iroha wants or is even comfortable with. And he already tried to gaslight her. What a creep.
Although the cluelessness of the FL is also a pet peeve of mine.
But since this isn't a development, but at the core of the story, I have a vague hope of his character arc being "learn to respect and empathise with the person before me" and hers being "learn to assert what I actually want, and don't let people just use me for their own wants".
Right now, this is like reading adumpster fire of a story on r/relationships.
Although the cluelessness of the FL is also a pet peeve of mine.
But since this isn't a development, but at the core of the story, I have a vague hope of his character arc being "learn to respect and empathise with the person before me" and hers being "learn to assert what I actually want, and don't let people just use me for their own wants".
Right now, this is like reading adumpster fire of a story on r/relationships.
Knew it!
Omg, a new hotty! I knew the team wasn't complete hahaha
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Airaabout 1 month ago
@Aira Ah, there's a cure for that. Just reread the first few chapters, and all that wasted pity will disappear :>
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IK WHAT THE PRINCE DID WAS WRONG BUT I KINDA FEEL BADDDDD
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Queenabout 1 month ago
@Queen And then she daced on a table and sang a dirty song. That's my head canon now xD
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@Suki Suki Daisuki~❤️ I guess she took off her clothes I don't know maybe...
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nikoabout 1 month ago
@niko Yes. Mel can be the hinge. Best proposition. Although I feel like this team isn't complete yet. But yeah. Please the polycule route, thank you!!
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i ship nine and melissa, melissa and yuri. The solution for this is a poly relationship between t...
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