putih gray0000's comments

mc is annoying.. but tht loli is more annoying.. usually the one annoying girl will be the one who catch feeling...

so much for being peaceful life u have a huge debit... fukinnn good for nothing, if he going like this why didn't he choose the rich mother..

i wonder why i stop reading this story... the start is good..

Pokemon go..

I'm reading again because this story have an anime version

useless mc. all he knows is acting cute. how came an old man soul acting more childish thn a child?.. he can't evn do anything

mc is too nice.. boring...

tht girl is the reason of all that but why she act like she didn't do shhhit?

she is not they real child i guess...

your bichh is ugly..

he should be say "if I'm stronger thn your kind i can kill all of the elves?"

the g** should give mc basic magic at least..