so sad, traumatizing, and uplifting at the same time! u feel the characters emotions and can relate to it all! such a wonderful story!

bc very very good

anyone know where to finish reading this freaking thing? I get so da** aggravated when u get into a great story then BAM! no more chapters or even the hint of one, wtfits?! ?!! ? frfr FINISH YALLS WORK IF U BE UPLOADING DONT BE SO HALF ASSED AND LAZY!

favorite fuc**** part no lie, so gd hawt! "
I'm not coming out till I'm done marking you...."
I mean holy freaking G**, am I right, cuz that sh** made my panties drop! 
own me PLEASE! LOL 
Excellent writer! bravo!

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

this was such a an amazing story I am snot crying thank you for this it had a bit of everything of life's hardships and it still came out a happy ending! I couldn't stop reading it, totally say for half a day and read every bit of it and will probably read it again! bravo!

I mean he** ya and I want some more of both these hotties I mean wow!

this is going down as one of my faves great great job, though I look forward to maybe some more one day, their vacation... the wedding and even an abrupt detour to a side story of his brother getting together with the friend be great!

omg want more! pls continue! I'm sad!

I love it

so lewd and so fuc**** yum!

perfect in everyway! loved it!!!!!!

88⅞7777

this is the sweetest freaking proposal ever! how he just did that! lord! I mean ask can be scary at times lol in a kinky freak kinda way, however he is also the most amazing and kind man ever! kinda was hoping lyle would get preggers though lol that would have been awesome!

omg I love love love loooooovve iiiiitttt!!!!!! so cute and hot at the same time my G** love the story and the ending and the spicy LOVE SCENE . GREAT JOB! 10/10