PotatomindS's Reviews

This Bl was so good, it was peak TvT The story is pretty interesting and has a good ending. Although, it has some sinsitive topics its not  that bad. Its a good short story to read as it had a good ending and it actually made me cry. Made me feel a lot of emotions, had a lot of crash out but at the end of the day it was a good ending. 

Plot: 9/10 (The story was so good, it was well though so many things to expect and things I did not expect to happen)  
Art: 10/10  

Potato proves 👍

If you just want to see fucking corn then go ahead 🫩😭 It's also so weird, one guy called him a student? Like hello? Why are you imagining him as a student? No plot too so I really don't recommend 😒

This is such a good book, the vampire and party boy combination is so unique. I have never seen something like it and not only that both of them are so adorable. Probably love each other very much 😭😭 I heard there is going to be extra chapters I can't wait! 

This story rocks man theres consent guys! CONSENSUAL SEX??? There  are a few BL like that 😭😭 I wished it was longer though 🥹

This story had such a potential I wished it was longer because both of them were such green forest vibe 😭😭 the art was also good and the story was cute I just wished it wasnt so fast 😭 I WANT MORE 😭😭😭😭😭

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Okay, so this story had a great ending, but there are things I despised, like how he forced Ao on the first day they met and didn't stop when Ao asked. It kinda pissed me off cause like he had seen Ao before, so their meeting was probably not a coincidence, and he already thought he was an omega. Sure, if he wanted to be closer with Ao, then, you know, talk and actually get to know them, but he literally harassed him, bro. Though I do think it worked out in the end, where he is actually a good partner, it could have been okay if he didn't force him, cause harrasment isn't okay, guys. In conclusion is still recommend it to people, as it was a little bit cute, ignoring all the bad parts, but he got what he deserved Ao anger, so I'm satisfied. 
Me approve into some extent

This is so bad TvT. It had potential, but it went downhill in the later chapters. Like, didn't she live 100 lives? Why is she acting so much like a child? She should be smarter than this. 

Me not approve

IT WAS MOVING SO FAST I NEEEDDDD MORREEEE I WANNA KNOW IF THEY REACH THEIR GOAL 
Me approve (READ IT)

As you can already see in the chapters, it's really short TvT. It had potential, but it was just so fast and short. If you want a short bl that has a cute ending, this is good for you, but to warn you, it's mostly smut lol. I totally recommend it for a good short read :3
Me approve

This is bad, like, okay. First, I was okay with him meeting with an alpha- like, yay, he has someone and then the butler joined them too? Hasn't the butler known Nox since he was a kid? Like, bro, isn't he like his son or something? Secondly, the adopted brother is one of his love interests- like, what?? Liam is okay with Nox helping with his brother's rut, like, um, bro, what? I can't do this; I really can't, and if you think about it, it also has sexual harassment since the brother forced it without his knowledge. We all know that Nox doesn't really know about these, except for the things that Derick taught him, so he was not thinking about what his brother would do by calling him in the middle of the night. He literally thought his brother just wanted to see him, like, bro, I can't with this.

This story is disgusting. Sure, there's some good part where it's funny, but throughout the book, there are a lot of grapes, and sure, some might argue that a lot of BL has that, but this is just weird. I mean, he kidnapped that man TvT. It's really weird to support grape and kidnapping, just like how people support Jinx. Sure, Jinx has a good ending, and they both got together, but you can see why they did what they did from each perspective. Dan wasn't really kidnapped, although he agreed to Jinx and stuff, and some of it wasn't consensual, which made the story really toxic. This is just weird, and I don't recommend it for people who are sensitive to these kinds of things. Tbh, it had potential with the Top being pregnant instead of the bottom, since this isn't an omegaverse, but the kidnapping and grape are not for me.

I give it a two for the idea of the top being pregnant was something I really have never seen before

This is a cute story, normal reincarnation stuff, but like tbh it's too similar to Who Made Me a Princess and Father I Don't Wanna Get Married. If you like both those stories, then I think you'll be okay with this; the only thing I don't like about it is the fact that her love interest is basically her cousin. Just like how I did not like the fact that the FL and the ML age gap in Who Made Me A Princess, like Lucas literally grew up with her when he was already old? But this one is just incest, help. I know in some cultures cousins can get married and stuff, but not my cup of tea lol. 

I really like this BL; it has a plot even though there are a lot of s scene, the characters have life in them, you know? I like how the dynamics between a prey and a predator is different in this story and that makes this one so unique. There is also a change of perspective around the story where we see it on the tops perspective and that is amazing, I cant wait for the next season of this story!

This was okay, I mean, I did not like the way he forced or harassed the guy. Their first was also kinda pressured and like idk. I mean, I'm happy they ended up together, but the path there was weird and disgusting to think about. Like, sure, he did not mean to, like, assault the guy, but damn, you did not have to pressure him into having s with you too, although the guy accepted him at the end as he had a good reason or like a sob story at that. I just have mixed feelings about this. 

The plot isn't good; it's mostly rape with the first few chapters until they get together. I don't recommend it.

The pace of this story was really fast, but I recommend it for new BL readers.

Did not even make it to the end...please don't read this

It's uhh good BL if you only want to see boys making out for most of the chapters. The story does not have a lot of depth on it but the art was really good. I recommend it for people who want to see, um, a lot of s scenes. 

Plot = 2/5
Art = 5/5 
Characters = 3/5

This was such a sweet story; these are the kind of short BLs that I like. The story has a plot and doesn't just have s scenes in it, but also creates background or something that gives the characters that impression through the readers. I would recommend this for people who are just starting to read BL, as it's not toxic and has a sweet plot.  

Plot = 4/5
Art = 5/5 
Characters = 4/5 
Ending = 5/5 

I RECOMMEND 

It's a pretty good series. If you want a cute BL that does not have a lot of spicy stuff in it, you should try reading this one. I just can't believe it ended so soon, but we have short stories, so I'm not that sad lol.