hey, i checked out your work and not to be rude or discourage you but i don't think that your webtoon will take off, just cause of the art alone. I might be too early to say this cause it's only 1 preview chapter, but the  faces look deformed and the facial features don't really atm in the right spot. The hands also look pretty unrealistic the way they're drawn. I'd gladly check it out of there was some improvement in the art. This was just my opinion, do with it whatchu want and good luck on ur journey. Best of luck!!