literary deviant's comments

Good start 

Short chpt

Those old men about to get educated 

Ehh it was a good quick read 

wtf at least give us a happily ever after chapter or something. Jeez 

Damn sudden gut punch, ouch :(

I've been working at the wrong company , no hot women work here.

Was that really the ending? This series left me confused about love hahah 

Plot twist!

Wow the drunk won? Didn't feel like that was the direction at all. I mean She's not the one on the cover?

Wtf did I just read 

Good story,glad they didn't drag it out 

What a long road but a good story 

Getting good, I wondered if there would be a deeper use of these warnings

Damn, spicy translator

Gonna get interesting now