Holdmysauce's comments

is this not voidman?

deus ex machina. unfortunate

WHy is he carryin the grimoire around?

I'm lost? is his sword blunt?

i feel like the first question he should have asked was "how would they tell them the food they wanted"

So no torture actually went down? lowk suspension of disbelief and realizing that this is a comedy has made me ignore all the faults this story has 

Still crazy that for a sergeant they walked in with no plan aside "beat everyone up" knowing it was a trap and probably beign briefed that the number 1 A rank was present when he already struggled against the number 2 (yes ik he wasnt fully powered)

"stupid but strategic" as they walk into the compound with no plan lmao

I;m o trying to hate but for a story set in the medival era, there existing mentos and relativly deep nowledge on  cooking and chemistry. It doesnt make much sense

Is it crazy for me to say that its lowk dumb how she questions that the number 1 hero is dead and the mc just easily giving her the information? Am I crazy to say that the writing lowk sucks?

Is it crazy for me to say that its lowk dumb how his past was explained?

is it crazy for me to say that its lowk dumb how Justice discvered her? 

looks ugly but thats just me

It was shelved for indomitable martial fist king

So there was a rome? Lowk dumb but alr

People don't talk like actual people and their memories are oddly good, but thats just me 

no the  "the blacksmith has a cool artifact that no one picks" trope

so if I name my son earth wind and fire, he could get all 3 elements?

gotta say, the hero was a real freak if he had smex with a tentacle monster

So he comes across a kid in the snow and doesn't tell his brother, who is probably the reason he;s out there about it? I guess he didnt want to tell him but still isnt great writting