Mr/Mrs/Mx author pls MAKE THE CHAPTER LONGER, I WAIT AN ENTIRE WEEK, AN ENTIRE WEEK OF H*L SO I CAN READ THIS, PLS MAKE THEM LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNGGGGGGERRRR!!!!!!!!!
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Da Muriel knight lady better bash the shitaki of of that goddamn prick of a ml
Blud makes the emotional intelligence of a rock look like that of nelson mandala
...Blud makes the emotional intelligence of a rock look like that of nelson mandala
He was in a COMA for 3 YEARS, majority of his muscles should have atrophied how tf is he able to walk?
No realism either ain't no way blud fell in love with a frisk partner hes only done it with 3 times
Put this shit on phub bruh who tf reads smut without plot
👍 👎 its just mid, everything is so rushed, theres no plot or character development, no substantial world building
What is happening, the progression makes no sense???
Bruh it needs to be more BIZARRE is you catch my drift
Nah mc is so fugging wide. If you look at the panel where mc and blonde female sitting next to each other, he is 3 times the shoulder width of her. The average shoulder width is 36cm and minimum 34 for females. So 3 times 34 means he is at minimum 102cm wide. Then if you compare his shoulder width to his height, you end up with a dude roughly 3.5m tall and 102cm shoulder width. I get that the author wants him to be buff, but everything should exist in moderation😭
The joestar bloodline runs strong in his veins

THAT WAS UNEXPECTED...The author is wild bruh
Feel like I'm the only one
...Tbh the intro wasn't the best and the pacing is a bit fast I feel like they could have made this into 2 cohesive chapter rather than one chapter that is confusing as hell to read