@Stardust you really don't need to read it if you don't want to.

I'm scrapping that novel anyway. Start back from beginning with clearer plot and world building. And also getting rid of the whole g** is involved in the story makes me cringe why I planed it on chapter 2. The rework I'm going for is leaning a little more on romance.

Suggested by a friend in a funny way, if you want your story to be interesting put a woman in it. The gremlin made me choke on water laughing. 

Just giving me a suggestion here would be very helpful you don't need to read it.
What i really have no ideas on are the politics on the medieval world and social conflicts and economy on the sci-fi world. 
I also don't have a decent plot to work with i was just coping whatever I'm reading at the time, like the novels extra, ending maker, and knights and magic. With a few tweaks to fit my world building.

@Stardust thanks man! 
I'm surprised your not put off by the fact that I'm using AI to write it. 
My friends said it would be better if it wasn't ai at all. 

If you're interested in judging my novel. I posted it on wattpad. Titled it *dimensional rebound. It looks like an abandoned story because it's making cringe to continue and no one is reading let alone comments to help me fix it. 

You don't have to btw.

@Stardust  I'm still revising it because it makes me cringe. It's 3000+ words only because I made AI refine and extend the short scenes I couldn't be bothered to extend myself. My friends say it's cringe overall, but they like the fight scenes (that's the part I put the most effort into — 1500 words of my own writing, the AI barely changed them).

@Stardust I see. I don't fully understand your idea but it looks similar to avatar. Where do you plan to post your novel someday? I feel like your also new but a little more experienced than me so I'd like to learn from you. Learning from pros just burns me out and I feel discouraged to continue.

I'll share my idea too to be fair. I wrote chapter 1. It's a story about 2 boys switching bodies similar to the *your name* situation, but mine is a 2 worlds situation one mc in a sci-fi fantasy world other mc in a medieval fantasy world. I haven't fleshed it out too much yet but I just flow along action, misunderstanding and comedy theme. 

I hope to learn from fellow newbies but I also take the pro tips to hart. The show not tell rule. I can relate to your stupid worry btw. Hahahaha

@Stardust I recommend you watch or read one punch man then. Hahaha I feel like you'd like it. Btw do you write novels? I see grey text under your comments. I feel like I'd enjoy reading your story.
*how to die?* that the title? Where can I read your works? I'm also collecting samples. (I can't make myself not cringe at my own novel...)

@Stardust I agree it's refreshing. Also yes your right about that soloing bit but I didn't mean like this should be another solo leveling copy paste, I meant he should just progress without going out of his way to hide what his capable of. it makes the dialogue cringe to read in my opinion. It's not like people will notice you right away if your a bit more talented than the rest. Like look at one punch man, mc op as sh** but not famous because his fights end in 1 sec. Mc not trying to hide he just doesn't care and moves on.

@Stardust I agree about the hiding mc sh** but making mc an attention seeker is also annoying. I'd rather he didn't try hiding it but just breeze through the trials but not getting noticed until he's too powerful to be unnoticed. Like how one punch man or solo leveling did it.

@slurp a yes the tsundere technique. I did that with beginning after the end, I got back on it with 100+ chapters to catch up on.

@Shadow I'm interested too. That Jason bit was funny as he**. From cute boy to buff bro. First thought there was what the he** happened to Jason