okay i will drop this, the story was interesting but its just another harem bullshit
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@Krysstal agreed
okay but honestly, harem was NOT NEEDED and not something that should've been in this story, the rest is good tho, lets see how it goes...
i think they chose to rush the end (literally took like 20 chapters or so from basically nowhere near mid of the series to end) because of money problems or something, the story is still good but it leaves a bittersweet taste if you read it fully.. it could've been a way better structured story and in the end they also chose to go on the troupe of "everyone wins" sort of..
this is extremely similar to another one that has the same exact setting.. just a bit worse since they are using AI to generate images
ah yes- you can't fight here, instead we will discuss about a tournament that will happen in 20 chapters in which you can fight to your heart content, now lets talk about it and find how to participate in the next 10 chapters.
i mean, i like the story so far BUT i would've made it a bit more interesting, for example since he gets 100k XP for every skill and 100.000x multiplier per XP for the levels, i would've made it so its difficult for him to learn skills, but once he does they become OP, but nevertheless, this doesn't look too bad and the story is not too fast either, lets see how it goes from here on out
now for the next 10 chapters, they will fight and talk, fight and talk ... milking this to eternity, in the past the whole fight would've lasted one chapter, are they going for 1000 chapters or what?
authors are just milking it atp, chapters are so short and miss any info whatsoever, it takes 5 chapters to even just explain something .. do they want to reach 10000 chapters to end this series or what?
this is so boring and average, it looks like it was made using AI too, dropping this already
this got boring, they just keep making it so long for no reason
"see the person that you first met" aka his twin sister, as she was in the womb with him and would be the first human being to come in contanct with him. "return to where it all began, reclaim what is rightfully yours" aka go back to your family, those that colluded behind your back to kill you and reclaim your position as the heir of the family. return to where it all began, is about where his bad past started, with him being forced to go into the battlefield and leave the family. as for the rest, well he said it himself, it was about lu sheng.
honestly, it was easy to figure out this much (other than the twin sister bit as we did not know of that prior to this part of story) but everything else we already got a glimpse of..
the lore is not even that bad, but why tf did the artists have to make this into goon sh**? you can't tell me this has a lore meaning if not for fan service.
seeing how regions are merging already, i'd say that all of earth was already united in round 20 he** maybe even other dimensions were united with them which we will not know till later on, because already there aren't lots of people alive out of the ~2b people that were taken.
also from the start we already saw that the angels were malicious and they killed without care but even then, the game wasn't designed by them as they are nothing more than pawns, i think the one that designed the game is a divine being or even just the will of the universe.
well, they never specified that the end of the story is at the 20th round, they only said they need to reach that to save earth.
that meaning that later there could be wars with the angels or other forces outside of the rounds themselves.
Great chapter. I've never commented before, but this is one of my favorite stories to read online...