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So i have written smthn new and i want to share it 
I hate her as I hate the rain
Everytime she comes
it makes me feel a strange ache in my stomach
It makes my mind feel lost in its view
I hate her as I hate the rain 
Everytime she comes 
I get lost in its noise that it makes me unable to hear others
She works her charms to disturb me
I hate her as I hate the rain 
Everytime she comes
She makes me vulnerable enough to slip 
And vulnerable enough to fall for her even more
STRAIGHT
MALE

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@zoro 💀👌Sheesh>> this line: Everytime she comes
it makes me feel a strange ache in my stomach. (I experienced it once...)
@The Pokemon fr bro like i still remember the last time saw i her i had a strange ache in my stomach for a second