Comment by Choco Brownie on Please Expose me by That Command - Chapter 1

Comment on ChapterPlease Expose me by That Command - Chapter 1
Choco Brownie
Choco Brownie·1 year ago
Ch. 1

The premise of this is so bad. "Subs are believed over doms when they are the ones who are shi*** people" but the ML is constantly using commands and doing sexual acts to the MC without consent. Then maybe he was slapped by that sub for a reson, he sucks. But the story is going to give him a bullshit past and excuse all the sh** he has dona and said, same with the MC. More authors should do po** without plot if they can't write instead of making up the worst storyline ever just to draw two guys fuc****

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