Comment by SparklingWater on Revelation Of Youth - Chapter 29

Comment on ChapterRevelation Of Youth - Chapter 29

It did seem weird why everything seemed to be going somewhat really good right? things getting out of the way, both characters not being complete imbeciles like in other rom-coms, they have their own personalities
HOWEVER, this was a masterful bait and switch, I bet you thought something's gonna happen right?

I bet you thought that fake *kiss* was actually a kiss right?

Things were going a little too well too be good, in only 29 chapters for actual romance to happen it would have been too fast
There's rarely an author that can pull that off and continue without f-ing up
I think there's going to be way more will they won't they, things that'll get in the way and make you think "oh no, they're not going to get together anymore" or other characters acting as rivals.
The author's strong points are definitely is characters for example you can easily read 5-10 chapters just about Chungah and be happy for her but the story telling is not the author's forte...too many random drama out of nowhere that gets calmed down immediately, too many bait and switch attempts... K-drama to the max

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@SparklingWater spoiler

Spoiler!
The author f-cked up. In chapter 37 the 2nd ml moves into the fl's house and it looks like the fl starting fo fall for him or something like that