Okay, so.... I'm speaking entirely from good writing perspective, but the guy should atleast have had a stab wound. It would have made for a little better story in terms of thickening the plot cause that would have opened up more possibilities of writing around him boxing with a stab wound, and our main damsel in distress of a main character feeling more responsibility towards the deus ex machina of a love interest... 😑
Comment by Artemisia on Jinx - Chapter 17
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@Artemisia not everything have to be realistic yk. its called fictional for a reason. and hes tge world best boxers ofc hes good at defending himself n everything
@ysystygtfh Just because its fictional doesn't mean it can not fall victim to mediocre writing. Look, I'm not hating on the BL, but, at this point, it's kind of predictable...