Comment by stinkiebeans on Don't Mix Business with Pleasure! - Chapter 85

Comment on ChapterDon't Mix Business with Pleasure! - Chapter 85
The writers bring in too much elements in this story..instead of focusing on the couple and how to make them getting back together, now the story is drifting away with SJ's personal problems..dear writers pls make new title for that story instead of cramping in this one..we need the angst to stop..

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@stinkiebeans This is the dumbest take I've ever heard from someone. They can't get back together WITHOUT ADDRESSING SEO JUHEON'S PERSONAL PROBLEMS. It's not "too much elements," it's actual character arcs that are being thoroughly explored rather than rushed just so readers get their half-assed happy ending. Quality stories are so undervalued in this genre and you're part of the problem.
@gimehe looks like you thought your take is the cleverest that you forget different people have their own preferences and definition of quality stories. If mine doesn't suit your taste doesn't mean it should be called dumbest. Did I said the writers shouldn't address SJ's personal problem? I said they are drifting away didn't I. The scope of the story is drifting away from the title itself and the way they maneuvered around SJ's personal problem looks like it's taking a big roundabout detached from the storyline. I'm all about building up characters and understanding their background but I'm saying NO to drifting away from the story. Plus I don't see I'm part of any problem from having opinion from my preference.
@stinkiebeans And people are allowed to disagree with your opinon. honestly if you don't enjoy the story why are you reading it
@stinkiebeans The way this is entirely wrong lol. They are literally working together just like they were in the last season and seo juheon is trying to maintain a boundary that dohu keeps pushing LIKE IN THE LAST SEASON. The concept is fundamentally very similar. Not sure what story youre reading but okay... The only difference is that there's conflict between them (which the last season was leading up to) that is both influenced by seo juheon's personal life and dohu's past actions, which are both being explored. YOU'RE mad because they won't just get together already. If the author made that choice, they would be neglecting realistic character arcs, which is clearly bad writing. That is my point.