Comment by Bella Pie on I Became the Daughter-in-Law of the Righteous Mad Dog - Chapter 55

Comment on ChapterI Became the Daughter-in-Law of the Righteous Mad Dog - Chapter 55
So we're just gonna forget a lot of loose ends here? Time skip and just forget ehat happens to Elvio? Did he also get executed? Or was he still kept in prison and left knowjng his brother will die since there wasn't really a cure. I'm not feeling bad for those villains but atleast give them a definite ending (execution or maybe he got loose and vowed revenge and bcome an even worse dark magician than his brother or something) and not just leave readers hanging. (Cliffhangers or vague endings are only good when it's written well and this is not an example of it)

Also the fact that Yuta feels more like a background character more than Bell(the knight) when he's the ML is a bit disappounting. The original Female lead (the saintess) has more character and more memorable than Yuta at this point. Why bother giving Isabella a love interest when they don't build his character or lore more. Maybe on season 2? But really, 50+ chapters with almoat no shred of charcter development is a bit disappointing. Here I thought I would love to see Yuta and Isabella interacting a lot since the first few chapters... It's like the author made Yuta as an afterthought and decided to have romance in the genre too but didn't exactly plan it out. 

Story would have been great it's just a bit disappointing dismissing a supposedly major character. The story isn't bad but could be a lot better.

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@Bella Pie This is the first time I got so motivated to write something like this. I usually just move on to next chapters but hopefully writing gets better in season 2.

It's just my 2 cents on the story. It's ok if other people don't think so, It just bothered me so I had to write it down for the future when the story gets really good and there are answers to my questions in S2 and I can eat my words. 😂