Comment by WischMoppel on Downpour - Chapter 56

Comment on ChapterDownpour - Chapter 56
The story drags...and drags...... too little development.... I know lots of slow burn stories like this, but this is somehow not that good, it doesn't keep me on edge like other stories I read so far. It's not about the s** scene, but the whole story is somehow not that good.

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