Chapter 72

<span class="mention" data-user-id="5Dy4bNoY">@p.martinez</span>  <br />this is actually one of the chapters I liked in the novel cause it showed a side of riftan that was truly terrified out of his mind to lose her and he was by her side the whole time and was being gentle to care for her Keep in mind she really could have died if he did not arrive in time. It makes him look like the bad guy :(

Awe there's so much missing and it's pretty watered down how sick she got compared to the novel. In ...

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<span class="mention" data-user-id="5Dy4bNoY">@p.martinez</span>  <br />gonna comment the chapter of you wanna read👇🏽 <br />Part 1/19<br /><br />
<div class="spoiler"><div class="spoiler-toggle">Spoiler!</div><div class="spoiler-text">“Take deep breaths. Slowly, now. Yes, just like that...”<br /><br />Maxi felt as though she were drowning. Lying curled up gasping for air, she felt someone gently stroke her back.<br /><br />Her shoulders quivered, and she barely managed to crack open her dry eyes. The familiar sight of her bedchamber illuminated by flickering orange lights gradually came into focus. Bewildered, she fixed her gaze on the corner of the dark room for a while.<br /><br />A wave of nausea washed over her. She groaned and writhed in pain, and the person holding her put a cold brass bowl to her lips.</div></div>

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