Comment by Savid on Kill the Lights - Chapter 69

Comment on ChapterKill the Lights - Chapter 69
Savid
Savid·1 year ago
Ch. 69
This story was absolutely terrible, and there are countless issues that need to be addressed. First, who was that bizarre lady with the orange hair? It’s critical to know if she had any connection with the old Haley. What was the meaning behind his purchase from her, and how did it tie into Mason's soul entering his body? We need to understand exactly what she did to make Mason's dreams manifest into reality, and whether it also contributed to his rising libido making him have dreams of getting fuc*** by men.
 
Furthermore, the lack of depth surrounding Mason's brother's death is unacceptable. What was the old Haley's plan with the ritual? What did he mean when he saw Mason and said, "If it's you..."? If anyone tries to defend this by claiming, "Oh, it's obvious he wanted revenge because Noah wouldn't sleep with him," they’re completely missing the point. This was a complex scheme filled with obsession, and Haley had nothing to gain by allowing someone else to take over his body and effectively kill him.
“How mutable are our feelings, and how strange is that clinging love we have of life even in the excess of misery"

 

4 Replies

@Savid it doesn't make sense plot wise, but most people are here to see 2 guys do it so idk what to tell you
Paro
Paro·2 months ago

@Savid Yup this story lacks depth and there are so many loopholes. But I have my own pov about your questions.
1. I think the old lady with bizarre hair is someone who is selling Haley sextoys. She maybe not directly involved in Mason and Haley's soul exchanging thing.
2. After getting obsessed with Noah, Haley maybe dig about Noah's past and found about Mason then maybe he did some kind of rituals to do something. This part still remain mystery but I think Haley was going to capture Mason's body and atleast have s*x once and then again come back to his body. But as Mason died, his body maybe didn't accept Haley's soul and both got destroyed.
3. Mason is a straight man but the body he is into is a gay body, with continuous sexual activities and drug abused. Just because your soul become different person doesn't mean you body will feel different. If we think back Mason's preference was a cute girl with short appearance where he needs to protect that person. Noah as a child was like that too. Dreams always comes showing subconscious mix up of your daily life and things you're thinking. His body was not getting s*x and his soul wanted someone petite and cute maybe that's why his dreams got twisted. Not sure if I am right but without any other hints I can only made this up as my pov.
4. Mason's brothers role here was nothing, his only family member died which led him to sadness obviously and freedom from any family bound so that can help in the story plot where whatever happens to Mason, nobody is going to dig about him anymore.
If anyone think about any other thing please tell me.

Cassie
Cassie·1 month ago

@Savid gosh reading is all about making the things up yourself. You lack creativity and this bl is actually pretty good. You must admit that the new idea made you read it all. And remember. Sometimes hold the opinion but since it can also be that you have no one to share your opinion with then fine. But admit the manga is pretty interesting. 

Savid
Savid·1 week ago

@Cassie If you have to fill every plot hole with "imagination," that's a telltale sign of weak writing, not a lack of creativity on the reader's part. The author simply lacks the skill to build a coherent story that doesn't rely entirely on psychological and sexual angst. While the premise is interesting, it isn't a novel idea, and it certainly isn't immune to critique, because it still isn't great. The comment section exists for sharing opinions (crazy concept, I know), so I'm completely entitled to share mine as you do yours.