Comment by KittiesGem on A plot twist is a plot twist plot twist - Chapter 69

Comment on ChapterA plot twist is a plot twist plot twist - Chapter 69

I don’t understand why he was so trusting, as if there were no risk of harm. Even inside the house, he walked around completely off guard, he could have at least carried a stick to defend himself or his kids! If it weren’t for the author, he’d be a goner by now, given that knife wound he sustained. And who knows what they made him drink, hopefully it isn’t poison. As for the ml, I don’t see him showing up with the police, either. It’s so frustrating; it feels like the only characters in this story who actually use their brains are the villains

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@KittiesGem You are absolutely right. I don’t understand why he didn’t take something with him, or call the police to accompany him to the house. He’s just walking inside without any way to protect himself or his children