@Yikes
Honest question, what did she do that was so sharp in that situation? This character's entire personality is simply questioning everything. 90% of her lines are questions. And that's not good... I don't see any sharp questions; in reality, it seems like she steals simple questions that would cross the characters' minds and throws them out there. And everyone's like, "Wow! How intelligent!"
You can criticize Soyeon, but at least she's more realistic—useless people in the apocalypse, like most of us would be. Not dumb, just useless and coward. The romance in this story should actually be better developed. The author erred in trying to elicit empathy from the readers for FL. Parallel to that, we have Iseul, who appeared out of nowhere with a poor personality.
Honest question, what did she do that was so sharp in that situation? This character's entire personality is simply questioning everything. 90% of her lines are questions. And that's not good... I don't see any sharp questions; in reality, it seems like she steals simple questions that would cross the characters' minds and throws them out there. And everyone's like, "Wow! How intelligent!"
You can criticize Soyeon, but at least she's more realistic—useless people in the apocalypse, like most of us would be. Not dumb, just useless and coward. The romance in this story should actually be better developed. The author erred in trying to elicit empathy from the readers for FL. Parallel to that, we have Iseul, who appeared out of nowhere with a poor personality.
You don't like me?
That's fine...
You don't like me?
K bye!
