Story is interesting but the mc's smile doesn't feel right
It doesn't fit his design or something
my guess is that the werewolf person isn't a bad guy but the stone manipulated his thought there is no evidence for this I just think it's funny if he beat's up one of the biggest victims I don't know what I'm writing I should have slept age's ago
Comment by Belgrim on I Picked A Hammer To Save The World - Chapter 3
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It doesn't fit with the character since it doesn't make any sense for him to smile at the people who tourmented and killed his sister and nearly him
Yeah those smiles creep me out.
@twistedfatality the smile is badass, you just on crack my boy