For me I think the problem is the tone. I can't tell if she wants to kill herself or not.
Let's say she wants to kill herself and is depressed, the female lead should show signs of one's who has given up on life. And the way I interpreted this story is that the girl is not sure of what she wants.
Too contradictive
Let's say she wants to kill herself and is depressed, the female lead should show signs of one's who has given up on life. And the way I interpreted this story is that the girl is not sure of what she wants.
Too contradictive