Comment by TheFool on There Are No Bad Military Dogs - Chapter 2

Comment on ChapterThere Are No Bad Military Dogs - Chapter 2
TheFool
TheFoolGeneral·4 months ago
Ch. 2
I really, really, really hate this. 2 chapters and no impactful/meaning full story until the end of chapter 2. It's just been "wow it's a girl with a gun" or "wow, she's a girl but cAn aIm?!" Or "wow, badass scene where she's holding this big gun in the air, one handed". It's just over Glazing a Female MC with a gun. And your telling me she can walk into the building, aim at the guy and kill him despite him aiming at her the entire time but can't turn and kill a zombie behind her, or the group of "Bandits" would be a little better at this for having been there for about 4 years. Bad plot building, bad character design (she looks good sure, but that's every manga ever soooooo, no special points). It's only chapter 2 I know, but it's been trash so far.
Yes ik we "learned" about this brother she's looking for, but that's a minor detail right now.

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@TheFool Gurl/Dude it takes time for a story to be good, so of course it's gonna be slow in the beginning. Most stories take up to 50+ chapters for it finally have something interesting happen.