"This is just like a densely hoard of monsters!" Frickin' go back to school, and learn how to properly write sentences. It should be "This is just like a dense hoard of monsters!", or "This is just like a densely packed hoard of monsters!" And I wonder if the author knows that fungi don't have flowers or leaves. The fire 'fungus' looks an awful lot a plant to me, and there is a big difference.
Comment by Jock Fanshaw on The Unwanted Immortal Adventurer - Chapter 61
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@Jock Fanshaw Yeah... i mean, if you want to go there, you should criticize how the tl doesn't even use pronouns (either first, second or third person) correctly. These people just use mtl for everything and rarely even proof read what they tl. But the Fire Fungus made me chuckle. Even in a fantasy world, that made no sense.