@Artpop I don't know if you realized or not and I'm not trying to be offensive, but I'm pretty sure everyone doesn't need something bad to be pointed out becaus they can basically see it wether they think it's good or not. There's basically no need to re write something if they can see the point of the chapter, once again, I apologize if this is offensive but I'm just speaking out my thoughts about the comment.
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