To be honest, I would have loved to see Ray and Angel's relationship progress, even if Angel was someone I disliked in the beginning of the story, his way of verifying of whether Gabriel was right for Luke just didn't seem right. The change we notice in Luke after being with Gabriel for long is so cute 
It didn't take me long to finish this story, since I was quite interested in seeing how it would turn out. Luke is so firm in his character, but when he let Gabriel in, or rather Gabriel forced his way in(which I completely approve of. He set his eye on Luke and wanted him) he turned out to be so loving. Also, I hated Samuel and Dora as well, but Dora is now in my good books. Initially, I thought she would do something bad, but it was Samuel who did instead. Anyways, I found this story adorable 
It didn't take me long to finish this story, since I was quite interested in seeing how it would turn out. Luke is so firm in his character, but when he let Gabriel in, or rather Gabriel forced his way in(which I completely approve of. He set his eye on Luke and wanted him) he turned out to be so loving. Also, I hated Samuel and Dora as well, but Dora is now in my good books. Initially, I thought she would do something bad, but it was Samuel who did instead. Anyways, I found this story adorable