It coupd have been an interesting idea but killing the old man and pushing the granddautlghter into revenge. Thats wrong. Thats evil. This is bad writing. Terrible writing. Straight trash story. Was an intersting concept could have been good but you not jist terrible at writing you are atrocious at it. Untill you up your writing game you should stay 100 ft from any writing device for the sake of all writing. You are giving writing a bad name. Do better or stop writing. 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩