please help me fix grammartical errors, reply to my comments with corrected phrases. thank you YmY i need to improve β
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@my crush don't know nerds like me getting hot π‘ at mangabuddy π reading something unholy girl the way i clutched my pearls when that panel happened like oh sorry I didn't know we were in a WHOREHOUSE DAYUM