Honestly only thing I'd change about this whole story is the colour of his tentacles. It's a colour associated with gloomisness (unless that's what author intended). Like maybe a more red colour would be nice. Otherwise love this
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Comment by heart drug on One Day, Tentacles Appeared - Chapter 18
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Yeah I get what you mean, personally I like the color it suits him more with his personality but ngl I would like it if there was like a lil red mixed in like but not bright red more of a burgundy highlight. 🧐