1. The author shouldn't be trying to glorify ra**, I don't care how much time they put into it, they shouldn't be putting any Time into ra**, 2. "Surprise s**" is only okay when it is CONSENSUAL NON CONSTENT which is a mutual agreement with safe words and other safety procautions to make sure both parties are enjoy the "surprise s**" which Tak did not do, this 100% ra** 3. KILLING STALKING IS A HORROR GENRE as well as having trigger warnings and other warnings so readers know that it will have uncomfortable optics involved, this didn't, the author is trying to make the ra** a romantic thing for "character development" which is disgusting, grow up, if your mindset while reading BL is "S** is s**" or thinking ra** is attractive, don't read it, YOU make everyone else uncomfortable and are truly disgusting