Comment by Bie Collector on For Your Murder - Chapter 10

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Bie Collector
Bie CollectorMember·11 months ago
Ha! To those thinking of he wants his parents love blah blah nah. I knew it. It's literally him coveting what's not his. Now he wants the FL and her little brother "owns" her aka cuz she's living for him and I bet if the friend was a good friend, she'd be on the chopping block too. Smhh this plot, it's shining a light on the growing rate of ppl unaliving themselves. It's a big issue and I am actually really happy the author is doing this. Plus I know he won't end up with the FL and probably die tragically but why do I think it will be with a smile and the FL looking down at him and him thinking "yes, I'll own that small part of her mind where she'll remember me and this moment" loll creepy but intriguing if so

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Justagirl
Justagirl·11 months ago
@Bie Collector  You're absolutely right 👍—it was never really about love. He might be a psychopath, sure, but he still feels. As a child, even small things like a flower or a pen caught his eye. But as he grew up, his desires changed—first to a ring, then a fancy lighter, and later to expensive watches… and finally, to a woman. This part seems obvious, right?
But why her, specifically? Maybe it's because when they first met, she wasn’t wearing anything flashy. No mask, no dramatics, no cries for help—just quiet acceptance, even in the face of desperation. He saw her in that raw, vulnerable state—her pain and despair so real, even the downpour didn’t shake her. And in that moment, he couldn’t reduce her to an object like the others. There was something deeper there. Something real.
And pleaseeee!!! let it be a happy ending!!! 💕 I don’t want him to die. The author always leaves us with a note of hope—so I’m holding onto that:)
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