The biggest problem I have with this story isn't that it's just s** or taboo. I've read a lot of BL. Some BL stories are 90% s** and they're full of awful characters. The difference between them and this, is that they're still interesting and still have a basic plot that keeps me a little engaged. You can have a story that's just NSFW, but it still has to be engaging. Not to mention, the s** in this story is just... boring and repetitive. Like. It's all the same with just different girls. If your story is JUST s**, at least make the s** worth reading. 💀 Like come on now. Try something new. Try a new k**k. Do SOMETHING.
Also the main character just sucks. His only character development is getting WORSE.
That's all.
I tried to read this and I first I kept going because I was waiting for the plot to do SOMETHING. But after skipping through, it never gets better or more interesting lmaooo
Also the main character just sucks. His only character development is getting WORSE.
That's all.
I tried to read this and I first I kept going because I was waiting for the plot to do SOMETHING. But after skipping through, it never gets better or more interesting lmaooo
