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Abandoned by the one I adored
The pain cuts deep, I can't ignore
I gave it my all, held on tight
But in the end, it wasn't enough, I plight
 
The hurt and sadness consume
As I wander, lost and alone
I thought I had found my happiness
But it was only temporary, now I moan
 
I try to keep my head held high
But the weight of the world bears down
I thought I knew my place in life
But now it all feels like a cruel joke, I drown
 
I see no end to this despair
No light at the end of the tunnel
I feel lost and without purpose
As I try to find my way, I funnel
 
But even in this darkest hour
I hold on to a tiny spark
That someday I'll find my way
And my wounds will heal and mark

I can't move on


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A friendly advice, please delete your poems after posting, people might plaigrise your work

have your teacher submit it for a student poerty contest or a publication for student poets (if you are still a student). Keep nurtring your gift and you could become a great composer or playwright or some similar trade

Plagiarize them I dont really care as long as everyone get to hear my experience that's fine :)

Or you can compile them as a story. Self publish it on Amazon... get discovered...

look for others. some take international submissions or look for publications with rolling deadlines. too soon to give up because one deadline passed you by

Google how to publish on Amazon.
first write a few more poems to form a collection. Save as pdf or mobi... the kindle format (Google that) somewhere in the menus of options on your account there is a set up for publishing. Books are basically printed on demand or just offered for kindle. You don't pay upfront...
and for those who do art. Amazon and other sites have a print merch on demand system.

google things