The translator is a Filipino. Anyway, I saw this on tiktok so I decided to see it for myself. At first I don't want to say something since I wanted to atleast read 3 chapters so basically this is my first comment here. Okay I just wanna say these: First, the story already had a conflict, I feel like there is no exposition/introduction, I'm kinda confused on what's going on. About why's the othere guy avoiding him. Second, the artyle is actually good so far, compare to what I saw on tiktok, I think there had to be a problem that causes such inconsistency in artstyle. The only problem here are,, the eyes are sometimes big even the gaps between them, the nose is disappearing when in front view but 3/4 and side profile is good. And third, lips is a bit wide and thick. But overall, it's good. if only this has an introduction, a not that long rising action before climax, then falling action and denouement, this would've been even better. I feel like there's a lot of holes. But we'll see since this is the 3rd chapter only. This have 5 chapters so we still don't know what will happen. Again, as I said, it's good just need clean ups and it's better.
Too much bl will be the cause of my death.