Comment by Koiji Mandoza on Pick Me Up - Chapter 145

Comment on ChapterPick Me Up - Chapter 145
Koiji Mandoza
Koiji Mandoza·2 weeks ago
Ch. 145

Won't even allow me to feel pain Damn What a monologue and the best arc in the story character wise and the antagonist was a terrifying as yet effective. Introduction 8/10.  Pacing 9/10 , Art 10/10 , Characters 9/10, Conflict 10/10 , internal conflict 8/10 , Dialogue 8/10 , monologue 9/10 , Main protagonist 9/10 . Side characters 8'5/10 , climax 10/10 , conclusion 8'5/10 .  9/10 Arc overall 

It's not my Fault it's yours Comment Kun your so annoying