Comment by Zippy on Akuyaku Reijou wa Slow Life wo Enjoy Shitai! ~Yatto Konyaku Hakisareta no ni, Daini Ouji ga Meccha Stalker Shitekurun desu kedo~ - Chapter 10

Comment on ChapterAkuyaku Reijou wa Slow Life wo Enjoy Shitai! ~Yatto Konyaku Hakisareta no ni, Daini Ouji ga Meccha Stalker Shitekurun desu kedo~ - Chapter 10

Everything is so... cliche haha, its nothing new, all the characters and dialogue are so robotic and formal, like, humans don't speak like this. They wrote this like they were writing an essay, the dialogue is also very predictable for some reason, almost like they read a few mangas, added nothing new and just brought out all the necessary requirements needed for the story to progress. 

I read someone say something last chapter and it was something like "now that the main story is getting stagnant, lets add some cliche fuc**** garbage to extend run time", like, ya'll do not need this sh** to be 40-80 chapters, just make it a 15-20 chapter short romance with wholesome slice of life senarios, they already made the FMC too broken eliminating all the tension and danger, it feels more like doing side quests after beating the main game, it just won't hit the same.

Shame, I kinda liked the premise, too bad the write doesn't know what "original" means. If ya'll like it though, more power to ya, i'll let it marinate for a couple of chapter, because I'm a complete B!tch for Romance 

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@Zippy sometimes its not the autor fault the editor sometimes ask them to make this things. My favorite example is in Demon slayer Rengoku is not supposed to die but the mangas editors make the author kill him, its sad but we cant do nothing about it.
@Mars its kinda hard to notice thats not part the original history because the author make a clutch and make Tanjiro dont have a revenge arc and make Tanjiro more human seeing Rengoku family