Comment by ERIS on Devil Drop - Chapter 38

Comment on ChapterDevil Drop - Chapter 38
I like it, but don't like it. The story is just... ehh. I've had so much second-hand embarrassment to the point I'm immune to it in this story. And plus, can't there ever be a time where the scenes isn't solely based on s-x? Can't it be focused on something else? That goes for the fight scenes, too. I want to see actualy drama, not just some stuff that goes like "Be my s-x slave!" or "As Lakam's slave, I cannot let you take my master!". That's just embarrassing.
-"So where we? Oh yes, you were holding your breath.” - Eris, Goddess of Discord.
-I'm lesbian hahahur