Comment by Mari Zari on Negative Love - Chapter 1

okay so I have read up to the recent chapter and its complete bs and a waste of time yes the art is good but the plot?he** na okay so the ML gets bullied in school and the mc was just a bystander mind you didn't bully ml himself but the ml wants to get revenge against the mc for just standing there instead of the bullies who actually made his life he**??okay yk what they say watching and doing nothing is the same as doing it urself even tho mc hasn't wronged him let's assume he has THEN JUST BEAT HIM UP AND GET DONE WITH UR "REVENGE" but nooo the ml rapes him, forces to live with him acts possessive gaslights him but yk the writer is so fuc**** sneaky even tho the ml is committing a crime it's gravity seems low and poorly fabricated into romance then BOOM the mcs ex returns which is also trashy like the ml but doesn't pretend not to be he acts shi*** this diverts us readers attention towards him instead of ml and the ml now seems "better" in comparison to the ex and yeah if someone starts saying "just don't read it if you can't handle red flags"bro it's not abt what the story and dialogues are so poorly written the writer ain't even sure himself if the ml should be a red green or black flag