Comment by Hinamori on Salt Heart - Chapter 11

Comment on ChapterSalt Heart - Chapter 11
Idk how I feel about the story so far.. I can’t figure out if MLs expressions are intentionally stiff and vague all the time or if the artist is just struggling to get it right? He’s definitely hot but with how little he talks and a range of facial expressions of a potato, I can see a lot of misunderstandings happening.  I agree with some of the comments here that MCs biggest mistake is developing feelings for him.

Like Asel please... even his friend told you that ML isn’t the type to give to charity just because so he’s definitely getting something out of this and right now, it doesn’t seem like it’s romantic interest so how come you're already in love 😭
This makes me think when they end up sleeping together it’ll be more of a physical thing for the ML and maybe even an accident related to all that omega/Alpha logic.
I know what to expect from these omegaverse stories, but please, writer, don’t make the main character super clueless and weak like every other omega.. even a little bit of independence  and brain power from mc could make this story more interesting 😫
As long as a story can keep me engaged I'll read it but beware complaining is my second nature.