Comment by Gojibul on The Delusional Hunter in Another World - Chapter 29

Comment on ChapterThe Delusional Hunter in Another World - Chapter 29
No real progression in story nor character. It is like watching a person just continuing to live their life without a goal / intent for anything. Good try on the author but you took something decent at start then just let it die slowly.

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@Gojibul we're having a ton of worldbuilding, character introductions, set up and we're still learning to understand the mc. how would you know if  a character develops if you don't know the character?? it's not even that slow-paced since everything progresses
@Gojibul oh well, he's an alien trying to figure out how to live normally in other planet 😂