..let me get into critique mode cause I can't keep quite . Bothe the art and the dialogue is so stiff , I mean you can keep up with it but there's hardly anything interesting that this book gives out that every other book doesn't. It doesn't have that unique selling point yet, that primary key is lacking...so yeah ...
@Stayerinarmy You when typos exist: 😡😤🥺 I know lol , clearly a Typo and to an oh so understanding "critique" such as yourself I'm sure it took you no time to entertain the idea of people being able to make silly mistakes. Or maybe you're too narrow minded and only expect perfection ? Enlighten me hm?, for all I know I could be the one who's backward
@Crystal you complain abt it in such a negative light but i see ur passionate comments under diff chapters which clearly show you're enjoying and keeping up with the story 😭
saying the book isn't interesting but you wanna see how it ends? loll just say you like it, cz ur contradicting urselff. That's like saying u don't like a certain food but eating it anyway just because
@qzzarad I don't like incest and don't run your mouth like you know me. I read books genuinely to see how they end even if I dont like them . How much of a ret*** do you have to be to not grasp such a simple concept. Don't get all up in my business, if what I do irritates you get fxcked quietly and don't bxtch about it to me . Ignore me it's that simple.
@Crystal woah there calm down. You did not have to pull out the slur lmao. did my words offend you? you seem very hostile in this comment.
you're telling me not to get up in ur business like this isn't a public comment section. You posted a comment, and you got replies. Why so mad? If you don't want me to reply then don't post a da** comment tf? I have all right to quote on quote "get up all in your business", because it's not like im intruding. If you were replying to someone, then yes, that's a one on one conversation. I'd have no right to say those things. But you simply made a comment.
abt ur point about incest, I get what you mean. I just finished reading and im like what in the actual fu**. But you can't bring that point up in this situation because you wrote this critique before you even finished the story. The incest part showed up in the last few chapters, and based on your comments under diff chapters, I'm assuming this is your first time reading.
I've never heard of a person reading a book they don't like, just to see how it ended. If you don't like the book then don't read it, full stop. Especially if you're gonna hate on it afterwards, you're just spreading negativity and that's NOT how you critique smn so please refrain from "getting into critique mode" from now on. Thank yew 😘😘
and idc if u read this cz it's long asf. this is a great way to practice my English 😋
