ok, that's a really shi*** intro explaining everything BUT what the he** is going on.
He fixed the country, then... was exiled aparently? Why? How? When? How old is he now? How long did he "fix the country"? What resources did he leave with? what resources did he find at his destination in exile? Why in the he** would hundreds or maybe even thousands of people follow him into barren lands with no food? NONE OF THIS MAKES ANY SENSE.
He fixed the country, then... was exiled aparently? Why? How? When? How old is he now? How long did he "fix the country"? What resources did he leave with? what resources did he find at his destination in exile? Why in the he** would hundreds or maybe even thousands of people follow him into barren lands with no food? NONE OF THIS MAKES ANY SENSE.
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